Wednesday, May 19, 2010

More Great Writing

Recently we've been trying to write more descriptively and yesterday Rylan completed the following outstanding effort. Enjoy!

Wolfman is a new evil villain. He is half-wolf, half-man. His fur is as soft as a pillow. His growl is as loud as thunder. His teeth are sharper than needles and his claws are as painful as 100 000 wasps stinging you. His eyes shine like red rubies and he can hear 90 times better than a human can. He eats you whole.
His tail is so dangerous it could break your head with one slash across your face. His bones are as hard as titanium. He is as tall as a flagpole, fast as the speed of light and he looks like Bigfoot when he stamps his foot because the whole world shakes. If you're in the country when he stamps his foot you will die.
He also smells like mouldy old socks.

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