Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Jordan's Fantastic Descriptive Writing

Bing! Bang! Boom went the forest trees when the biggest monster on the island arrived.
The monster is grey and as fast as a rocket and as tall as the mountains. He always growls and dribbles like a pack of dogs.
He hates sardines. He hates them because they are scaly like a python. He just wishes he could have scrambled eggs.
His fur feels like a coffee couch and his legs are scaly. He likes to fish with his hands and they also smell like sardines.

Magnificent effort, Jordan! A really impressive effort.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jordan, I love the idea of a 'coffee couch' - that's great, well done. From Rylan's Mum

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